The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar chart shows the percentage of weekly income which was paid for eight categories by families in one country in two years 1968 and 2018.
Overall, in 1968 the highest families’s spending on was food while in 2018 it was belonged to leisure. From 1968 to 2018, food,fuel and power, clothing and footware, and personal goods showed a downward trend while housing, transport and leisure was rose,and household goods was stayed.
In 1968 food had the highest percentage among all categories, it account for 35 percent. Spending on housing, clothing and footware was equal to 10 percent each. Household goods,personal good,transport and leisure was around 7 to 8 percent,while the fuel and power was only 6 percent
Half a century later it means in 2018, spending patterns diverged more widely. Families tripled their spending on leisure to about 23 percent, which was highest. Concurrently,they spent larger proportions of income gained a week for transport and housing at 14 and 18 percent.Reversely, food’s figure halved,fuel and power,clothing and footware,and personal goods had a minimal drop to 5 percent or under. Household good still the same 1968.
- The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Some people believe that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to work in the country where they did their training Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish Discuss both these views and give your 84
- Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
- The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main fe 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The bar chart shows the percentage of we...
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... Overall, in 1968 the highest families’s spending on was food while in 2018 it wa...
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Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , fuel
...nged to leisure. From 1968 to 2018, food,fuel and power, clothing and footware, and p...
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Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , and
... housing, transport and leisure was rose,and household goods was stayed. In 1968 fo...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'accounts'?
Suggestion: accounts
...est percentage among all categories, it account for 35 percent. Spending on housing, cl...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , personal
...qual to 10 percent each. Household goods,personal good,transport and leisure was around 7...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , transport
...cent each. Household goods,personal good,transport and leisure was around 7 to 8 percent,w...
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Suggestion: , while
...rt and leisure was around 7 to 8 percent,while the fuel and power was only 6 percent ...
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Suggestion: , they
...percent, which was highest. Concurrently,they spent larger proportions of income gain...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Reversely
...nsport and housing at 14 and 18 percent.Reversely, food’s figure halved,fuel and power,cl...
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Suggestion: , fuel
... percent.Reversely, food’s figure halved,fuel and power,clothing and footware,and per...
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Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , clothing
...ely, food’s figure halved,fuel and power,clothing and footware,and personal goods had a m...
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...ved,fuel and power,clothing and footware,and personal goods had a minimal drop to 5 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30107526882 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13974812175 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618279569892 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2081188613 43.030603864 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.555555556 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0386097252162 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019419011936 0.103423049105 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295412608549 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0361345656316 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364258956182 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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