The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph presents data on the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017, categorized into two groups: visitors staying on cruise ships and visitors staying on the island.
Overall, there was a noticeable upward trend in the total number of tourists visiting the Caribbean Island throughout the given period. The number of visitors staying on cruise ships generally increased, with the exception of a decline in 2012. However, the number of visitors staying on the island consistently exceeded that of visitors staying on cruise ships, except in the final two years.
Looking at the specific details, the number of tourists staying on cruise ships experienced an initial increase of approximately 0.25 million in 2011. This was followed by a decrease, which was then recovered in 2013. Subsequently, there was a gradual rise to around 1.5 million visitors by 2017. On the other hand, the number of tourists staying on the island remained stable until 2011, after which it experienced a slight increase to approximately 0.75 million visitors. This figure remained relatively steady for three consecutive years, from 2013 to 2015. However, there was a decline of approximately 0.25 million visitors in 2016, followed by an increase in the final year.
In summary, the total number of tourists visiting the Caribbean Island demonstrated a consistent upward trend during the period under review. Notably, visitors staying on cruise ships outnumbered those staying on the island, except in the last two years.
Please note that the revised version aims to maintain the essence of your original writing while improving its clarity and coherence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...ng on cruise ships generally increased, with the exception of a decline in 2012. However, the number ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, then, while, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 265.0 196.424390244 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35471698113 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71059522074 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483018867925 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1014920193 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.153846154 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164599693962 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670394585932 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076045853917 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1124098064 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840292561714 0.0819641961636 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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