You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rele

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph illustrates the number of visitors of a particular Caribbean island over a 7-year-period from 2010 to 2017. The statistical data was measured in the unit of millions of visitors.
Overall, the general trend in figures was upward for visitors selecting either the option of staying on cruising ships or staying on island. Noticeably, there were more people choosing to have a stay on island than settlement on cruise ships.
Particularly, take a look at the first two years of the period, the total number of visitors started at roughly 1 million, consisting of 0.5 million tourists settling on island. In contrast, the number of tourists on cruise ships halved the one on island A year later, while the figures for cruise ships flattened off at the first year’s number of visitors, those for cruise ships doubled the number in the previous year, which led a total rise of 0.25 million in the figureheads for both included options of settlement.
Throughout years, the figureheads generally increased, with the exception of staying on island between 2013 and 2016, of which figures underwent a plateau at around 1.5 million people, then a drop by 0.25 million in the remaining year. At the end of the whole timescale, the total statistics reached the summit of the entire graph, at precisely 3.5 millions of visitors. Accordingly, the number of those on cruise ships stood at roundly 2 million, higher by 0.5 million than the counterpart on island in 2017.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The graph illustrates the number of visi...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...s, the figureheads generally increased, with the exception of staying on island between 2013 and 2016...
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Line 4, column 348, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: '5 million'
Suggestion: 5 million
...mit of the entire graph, at precisely 3.5 millions of visitors. Accordingly, the number of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, look, then, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 246.0 196.424390244 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73973185003 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520325203252 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.9825874835 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113324795224 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606385018227 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608796670569 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876980891357 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477997633723 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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