You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic: Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.
Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words
Today, thanks to development of medicine market, an increasing inlux of people seek for functional medical products to cure their health problems, rather than a traditional method of visitng their usual doctoc. While the former practice does provide certain benefits to patients in need, it might present admittedly more drawbacks, with which I agree. The essay below will give explanations for the author’s personal viewpoint of the aforementioned development.
To begin with, alternative pills and tablets do offer major benefitd to patients, as they save a significant amout of finances for access to medication. While in traditional order, people even have to deposit prices for a visit to the hospital, along with those for drugs assigned by the thereby doctor, through mere purchase for additive medicines, customers are already not obliged to see the doctor, once the products’ usage prescription able to access online. For example, many customers in Australia consume a daily dose of calcium supplement tablets, cutting down fees for hospital visit. Additionally, uneven daily schedules might affect the choice of pursuing the conventional access to medication assigned by doctors. This stems from the fact that most doctor visits have to be arranged in advance for a certain period of time, yet any unexpected occurrences cannot be predicted to avoid during the period booking for the visits.
The explanations above clearly prove that products supplementing medical process might be the optimal choice to cure health problems once there is littile flexibility in economic conditions and timetable.
However, disadvantages of overuisng alternative medical products outweigh its advantages. One of these negative aspects is severe threats such a modern practice pose to the state of health. In fact, the majority of doctors are to undergo a supervised process to acquire a certification as qualified, which means throughout extended supervision, they have already obtain knowledge and skills compulsory for any medical operations and therapies. Besides, a wide range of medical alternates are offer online without qualification from justified medical authorities. Once relying on usage of such unqualified products, side effects might inevitably appear, affecting their health status, due to potentially unsuitable compounds within the alternates. The example of this is the case of Vietnam medical market, where a number of middle -aged women overuse medicines distributed online to whiten their skin without suggestions from certified therapists and beauticians, which later deteriorates their reproductive system by presenting the issue of infertility. Combining the evidence with the analysis above, the essay apparently reaches the idea that exploitation of medical alternates might be counter- effective without interference from qualified professionals.
In conclusion, the common usage of alternative medical products is a majorly negative, rather than positive, development. In the future, as recognition of medical issues among people are highly raised, the traditional act of visiting a regular doctor will still be carried out, while the modern counterpart of using medical alternates will be practived more efficiently.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'obtained'.
Suggestion: obtained
...extended supervision, they have already obtain knowledge and skills compulsory for any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, however, if, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2773.0 1615.20841683 172% => OK
No of words: 482.0 315.596192385 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7531120332 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68556276237 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03311626102 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 176.041082164 163% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595435684647 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 893.7 506.74238477 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.9680456322 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.055555556 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12800167691 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388120764405 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277086569187 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695944777071 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192935573997 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.71 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 177.0 78.4519038076 226% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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