There is an adverse phenomenon in which more and more individuals are seeking substitute medical approaches rather than conferring with a doctor.
Firstly, a vast majority of those who endeavour to cure themselves with their own method have the tendency to immerse themselves in a delusional where they are capable of managing the issues. Specifically, that state of mind is accumulated numerous times when they successfully treat several illnesses thanks to their medical decisions. In lieu of that, there is an imperative difference between casual health problems and severe ones, which is one of them cannot or is extremely unlikely to be treated by those who lack specialized pieces of knowledge, experience alongside paramount skills. For instance, it is easy for everyone to boost their immune system by simply consuming a variety of vitamins, on the contrary, treating various chronic diseases, such as heart disease, diabetes or cancer is a strenuous task.
Secondly, doctors are the people who devoted their time and effort to reach the fruit in the field of the human body. Therefore, it is wise to discuss your health issues with an expert in order to have a bright awareness of your body's circumstances and be prescribed the most effective treatments. In addition, they can give us a number of elaborated and profound pieces of advice. For example, most of our civilization does not acknowledge some signals of cancer as well as innumerable other possibilities until a doctor told us that those ailment potentials have already thrived.
In conclusion, some individuals hold the notion that they have the powers and abilities to tackle their health issues when in reality, it is the opposite. I wholeheartedly believe that scheduling a meeting with a medical expert or doctor is the most ideal and thoughtful way to maintain the best body condition, considering they have the expertise to do so.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18064516129 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92583312575 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606451612903 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.9861945612 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1818181818 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6363636364 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.09765736913 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369506494735 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.015090752386 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578151982645 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114662770157 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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