The bar chart provides data on the percentage of people who go to cinemas in a European nation on different days from 2003-2007. Overall, it can be seen that while the most people went to cinemas on Saturday, the least went on Monday.
Looking first at the days when more than 30% of people go to cinemas, Saturday witnessed the highest proportion at all times, starting from just under 40% in 2003 to around 42% in 2007. The second-largest proportion was on Sunday which began with approximately 30% in the first year before rising to around 32 four years later. Friday, however, experienced neither a rise nor a fall during the period, remaining at 30%.
Moving on to the percentages that were less than 30, There was only 10% of people going to cinemas on Monday in 2003, being the lowest percentage in that year. The number climbed to roughly 12 in 2007. Tuesday had a downward trend with 20% in the first year, followed by approximately 18% in 2007. There was a steep decline on Wednesday. Despite having 20% in 2003, it plummeted to less than a half of it, ending at just below 10%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58673469388 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54609217844 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6767277226 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151672627784 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573746208508 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629919984281 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114622685726 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543609154599 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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