The graph below shows the popularity of different fast foods in Britain and the trends in their consumption. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line diagram demonstrates the changes in demand for Hamburger, Fish & Chips, and Pizza in Britain over 20 years between 1970 and 1990.
It is immediately apparent from the figure that Pizza was the most demanded food in Britain in the 1970s. The demand for Pizza in 1970 was around 300 units. However, it started to fall, and after a significant decline, it reached a value of 200 in 1985 before it started to grow gradually.
The most striking fact about this figure is the change in the demand for Fish & Chips. Initially, its consumption was as low as below 100 units which rose marginally in the first ten years (1970 to 1980), reaching a value of around 150 in 1098s where it escalated exponentially and hit the high of 500 units that made it the most eaten food in Britain.
Finally, Hamburgers was the least consumed food among this triode in 1070. The demand for Hamburgers rose slowly from 1970 to 1985 (from bellow 100 units in 1970 to around 150 units in 1985. In 1985 the demand surged dramatically and outnumbered the demand for Pizza in 1990 by approximately 100 units (demand for Pizza was around 100 and Hamburger was around 200 units).
Overall, in 1970 Pizza was the most consumed food in Britain that became the least demanded food at the end of the period. In contrast, Fish & Chips emerged as the most consumed food in the 1990s.
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The graph below shows the popularity of different fast foods in Britain and the trends in their consumption Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main featu 61
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 10
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Hamburger' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Hamburgers'.
Suggestion: Hamburgers
...its demand for Pizza was around 100 and Hamburger was around 200 units. Overall, in 1...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63900414938 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4267417492 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45643153527 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3322493253 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.636363636 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808518857372 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038877952465 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226885025138 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556557117922 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183482085698 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 338, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'Hamburger' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'Hamburgers'.
Suggestion: Hamburgers
...its demand for Pizza was around 100 and Hamburger was around 200 units. Overall, in 1...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63900414938 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4267417492 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45643153527 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3322493253 43.030603864 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.636363636 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0808518857372 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038877952465 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0226885025138 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556557117922 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183482085698 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.