The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

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The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

Submitted by ngodu on Sat, 07/20/2019 - 02:37

The line graph shows the populations of India and China since the year 2000 and they will change in the future.
Overall, the number of china dropped sharply compared to India from 2000 to 2050. Over the 50 year period, the populations of india is going to experience steady rise and it will overtake China.
In 2000, the figure for India was about 1 billion. This number will raise steeply to over 1.4 billion in 2030. In 2030 to 2050 period, the population in India will increase quickly from over 1,4 billion to roughly equal 1,6 billion in 2050.
On the other hand, the populations of china higher than in india by 0.25 billion in 2000. From 2000 to 2030, the number of china will growth dramatically just over 1,45 billion in 2030. After peaking at nearly 1.45 billion in 2030, china’s population begin to fall sightly by 0.05 bilion in 2050.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64473684211 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26633039573 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539473684211 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2004311153 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.4444444444 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362458759714 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.179172690093 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104925046858 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266420784419 0.15604864568 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887093457892 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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