The given line graph provides percentages of aged people in Japan, Sweden and USA from 1940 to till date and projection for the year 2040.
Overall, it can be seen that the proportion of aged people have increasing trend from 1940 to till date in Japan, Sweden and USA and it can be predicted that the trend will remain so in the remaining period.
In 1940, the proportions of aged people in Japan, Sweden and America were 5%, 7% and 9% respectively and after 4 decades it reached 3%, 13% and 15 % respectively. In 2000, the proportion of aged people for Japan was 4% and for Sweden and America it were 15% and 14% respectively. For Japan it is predicted that the proportion of aged people will increase and reach around 7% in 2020 whereas for Sweden and USA it is predicted that the percentage of aged people will remain stable for America and reach 14% in 2020 and for Sweden it will reach around 18% in 2020. Moreover, it is predicted that the proportion of aged people in Japan, Sweden and USA will increase and reach around 27%, 25% and 23% respectively.
- University should accept male and female students equally in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? 67
- The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the internet everyday from 2003 2006 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 74
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Cambridge ielts 5, page 61
- The key to solving environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient life or live a less comfortable life for the sake of future generations To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, whereas, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 6.8 265% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51813471503 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51396355458 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.39378238342 0.547539520022 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.189572284 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.333333333 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1666666667 22.9334400587 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0842828170767 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622146668593 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022197855009 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072653925241 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206591654299 0.0819641961636 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.38 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.53 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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