The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.
» You should write at least 150 words.
The given line chart illustrates the percentage of the population in 65 and above age group from 1940 to 2040 in USA, Sweden and Japan.
Overall, the population in this age group of Sweden is highest currently and the opposite is true for that of Japan. In addition, the figures of all the countries are anticipated to increase until 2040.
In 1940, the proportion of people aged 65 and above in the USA was highest, at nearly 10%. Meanwhile, those of Sweden and Japan were just around 7% and 5% respectively. However, in the end of 1990s, Sweden’s figure overtook the USA’s figure, occupying nearly 15%. Since 2000, Sweden’s figure had risen significantly , taking 20% in the years around 2020. In terms of Japan’s figure, its figure was just around under 5% until 2000.
On the other hand, from 2000,the percentage of people in 65-and-above age group of Japan has increased and is even projected to incline dramatically, reaching approximately 27% in 2040. Meanwhile, that of Sweden and Japan are anticipated to go up to 25% and roughly 23% in respective order.
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 78
- The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...re anticipated to increase until 2040. In 1940, the proportion of people aged 6...
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... Sweden’s figure had risen significantly , taking 20% in the years around 2020. In...
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...e was just around under 5% until 2000. On the other hand, from 2000,the percent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93406593407 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8074883974 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3446965211 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107938357188 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488184966744 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567339459161 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824697362583 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336465163347 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.