The line chart represent the information about the elderly people, who categoried age with an 65 and over in three different countries such as Japan, Sweden, and USA from 1940 to 2040.
According to the petcentages, in the beginning of the period the USA illustrated the highest percentage of elderly people which was around 9% in 1940. However the elderly population in Japan presented the least percentage was 5% and Sweden was approximately 7% in 2040. In 1980 Sweden and USA had been increased till around 14% and15% in respectively their population, which were nearly as twice as large as population in 1940. Whereas Japan deceased slightly until 3% by 1960 and leveled off until 1980.
After 50years later in between 2020 and 2040 Japan had been achieved as three times as grate as population who over 65 in1980, though between 1980 and 2020, the elderly people almost remained constant, whereas by 2020 in Sweden was rose till 20%.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that in the beginning of the period USA was the highest and lowest was the Japan, though at the end of the period Japan was the highest and lowest was USA. Mover, Sweden was not change their level expect in around 2020.
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Cambridge ielts 5, page 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, whereas, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7729468599 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45483841641 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531400966184 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6973515423 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.875 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112476082347 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542062086443 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062960486165 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0906277317056 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701851444366 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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