the graph below shows the quantitives of good transported in Uk between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.
The line chart demonstrates how many tonnes of commodities transported in the British over the period 28 years starting from 1974 by 4 kinds of vehicles named the road, water, rail and pipeline, respectively.
It can be seen that the number of tones that carried by 4 means of transport slightly fluctuated from 1974 to 2002. Road transportation lead the first priority of the quantities in the delivery. Meanwhile, the figure for goods transported by pipeline always hit the lowest point when compared to 3 other means of transport.
Firstly, in the UK, the commodities delivered by road reached around 79 million tonnes, which is 30 million tonnes as much as the figures by railway. There was a considerate fluctuation in the amount of goods transported by road between 1978 and 1994, then the figure rosed up to nearly 100 miilion tonnes in 2002. the railway was used for delivering products remained the same popularity in 1974 and 20002
Secondly, the year 1974 witnessed the least number of goods transported by pipeline and water( it was around 5 million tonnes and 40 million tonnes, respectively). while the amount of commodity delivered by water peaked at nearly 60 million tonnes in 1982 and then continued to increase until 2002, the British less use the pipeline for transportation from 1974 to 2002.
- Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 77
- Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages 78
- As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? 73
- many people think that planes should be restricted because of it causes pollution and use up energy.do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 316, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...p to nearly 100 miilion tonnes in 2002. the railway was used for delivering product...
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Line 7, column 163, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...es and 40 million tonnes, respectively. while the amount of commodity delivered by wa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, second, secondly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00454545455 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83200057781 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.1687179099 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.625 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252634616757 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125607647304 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047665402571 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161313315037 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596183058815 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.