The graph shows the weekday fluctuation in the number of people at the Toronto metro system for the year 2007 in the month of July
The busiest time of the day is in the morning. There is a voyager sharp increase between 06:00 and 08:00, with 400 thousand people using the station at 8 o'clock. After this, the numbers of commuter drop quickly to less than 190 thousand at 10 o'clock. Between 11 am and 2 pm the number rises, with a plateau of just under 310 thousand people using the metro system.
In the afternoon, numbers decline, with less than 110thousandstraveler using the station at 4 pm. There is then a rapid rise to a peak of 390 thousand at 6 pm. After 7 pm, the number of people falls significantly, with only a slight increase again at 8 pm about 150 thousand, tailing off after 9 pm and at 10 pm the number of passengers is approximately about 160 thousand.
Overall, the graph shows that the volume of commuter is most crowded in the early morning and early evening periods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
... thousand people using the station at 8 oclock. After this, the numbers of commuter dr...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...quickly to less than 190 thousand at 10 oclock. Between 11 am and 2 pm the number rise...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47802197802 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67715516235 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532967032967 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2304012529 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927696894274 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503037397753 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781472014626 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101938830346 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106872076066 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.0 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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