the graph compares employment rates in three sectors of the economy, in the Uk, 2000 - 2010.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The graph shows information about the progress of certain diseasses during childhood between 1950and 2000 in developing countries.
In this graph in 1950 childhood diseases increased from 2000 to 14000 more precisely this diseases malaria smallpox and tuberculosis was widespread in the 1950 that it accounted for 50%of all illnesses .In the remaining years smallpox and malaria spread . but in the 1960 childhood diseases decreased from 14000 to 10000. tuberculosis was prevalent in the 1960. In the 1960 that it accounted for 20%. malaria and smallpox . In the 1970 again reduced childhood disease more precisely tuberculosis and but malaria was also on the rise . smallpox was not common during this period . In the 1980 , a better result was a decline in childhood morbidity. In the 1980 malaria was prevalent in developed countries.tuberculosis and aids accounted 40 percent . In the 1990 malaria and aids was widespread infact 2000 to 6000. tuberculosis accounted 10percent. In the 2000 aids childhood diseases was prevalent in developed countries and infact 50% malaria accounted 30%and tuberculosis 20%. In the 2000 childhood diseases increased 2000 to 12000.
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- The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47222222222 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12035989191 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.0924560951 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3571428571 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 22.9334400587 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.928571428571 5.23603664747 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 1.69756097561 1296% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.05101302547 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0215892885395 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034000777942 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674614770766 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322844856052 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.56 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.