The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age.
The figure shows consuming drinker habit in the US population about four kinds of drinker based on the age.
Overall, we saw a trend of increase consuming in Ex-drinker, decrease in never drinker and light drinker along with the rise age, although there are a reserve trend for above condition in the age between 25-34 years old.
With account for 40%, older people with the age between 65-74, Ex-drinker is the most popular drinker. Although, about other types of drinker, they have the least interested compared to other age groups of people. In contrast, the majority of teenager between 16-24 years do not have interested to any drinker with account for 61%. This trend after than a fluctuation in next period experience a smoothly decrease until last age group. For light drinkers, the condition is similar to previous process, beginning with 25% for 16-24 years and reach to about 35% in age group between 25-34 years old, and then decrease gradually, and eventually reach to 10% in people with the age of 65-74 years.
About the heavy drinker, trend is completely fluctuated. The first group (with age between 16-24) and last group( 65-74 years) have the least interested in this kind of drinker with about 5% of whole population, and the adults with the age range of 45-54 years have the highest interest in it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 160, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'trends'?
Suggestion: trends
... rise age, although there are a reserve trend for above condition in the age between ...
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Line 9, column 395, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('smoothly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...a fluctuation in next period experience a smoothly decrease until last age group. For light drinker...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, in contrast, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92888888889 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38039731096 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506666666667 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.2680284706 43.030603864 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.222222222 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145833581587 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830925607773 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742951188742 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131040596947 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087194338101 0.0819641961636 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.