Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, one of the most important subjects in the whole world is the ways of protecting the environment. Some people believe, this is governments duty for taking care of environment, whilst other people think this issue is people responsibility. However, in my view both of them are equally responsible for it. This essay intend to survey both views.
Governments can be have main role in reducing damages to the environment. Firstly, by law they can restrict companies which emit pollution gasses to the atmosphere such as CO and CO2 and also should encourage industries which product goods with fewer packages that are not harmful for environment. With doing this, we will have witnessed a reduction in pollutant environment. In addition, the government can sponsor from production of the electrical vehicles and given subsidies to investor who work in this field. As a result of this action is reducing in the number of vehicle which work with the petrol or gasoline. This fuels emit the many amounts of toxic fumes such as CO to air that have detrimental effects on the environment.
On the other hand, it is an undeniable fact that the government cannot oversee or control actions of all the individuals even by law. Therefore, people themselves should do activities for it. Initially, they can buy the products which do not harm to the environment. For instance, the goods with less packaging or with the packages that are recyclable. Furthermore, parents should educate to their children about deleterious influences which the destruction of the environment can be have on human health like lung illnesses. Consequently, when they grow up, more effort for protecting of the environment.
To sum up, I think that governments or people will not be able alone preserve from environment and both of them are responsible about the protecting of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12703583062 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95584613733 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543973941368 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1373007341 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5882352941 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252486338927 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776505452682 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931765636827 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178197898495 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121290965069 0.056905535591 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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