Some people think that it is the responsibility of governments to take care of the environment, while others believe that it is the responsibility of people to take care of the environment.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, one of the most important subject in the whole world is the ways of protecting the environment. Some people believe that, this is governments duty for take care of environment, whilst other people think this issue is people responsibility. However, in my view both of them are equally responsible for it. This essay intend to survey both views.
Governments can be have main role in reducing damages to the environment. Firstly, by law they can restrict companies which emit pollution gasses to the atmosphere such as CO and CO2 and also encourage industries which product goods with less package that do not harm the environment. With doing this, we will have witnessed a reduction in pollutant environment. In addition, the government can sponsor from production of electrical vehicle and given subsidies to investor who work in this field. as a result of this action is reducing in the number of vehicle which work with the petrol or gasoline. This fuels emit the many amount of toxic fumes such as CO to air that have detrimental effect on the environment.
On the other hand, the government cannot oversee or control actions of all the individuals even by law. Therefore people themselves should do activities for it. Initially, they can buy the products which do not harm to the environment. For instance, the goods with less packaging or with the packages that are recyclable. Furthermore, parents should educate to their children about deleterious influences which the destruction of the environment can be have on human health. Consequently, when they grow up, more effort for protecting of environment.
To sum up, I think that governments or people will not be able alone preserve from environment and both of them are responsible about the protecting of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: As
...ies to investor who work in this field. as a result of this action is reducing in ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun amount seems to be countable; consider using: 'many amounts'.
Suggestion: many amounts
...petrol or gasoline. This fuels emit the many amount of toxic fumes such as CO to air that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uels emit the many amount of toxic fumes such as CO to air that have detrimental ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ns of all the individuals even by law. Therefore people themselves should do activities ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, in my view, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10810810811 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94303103993 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537162162162 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4194738853 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9411764706 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0588235294 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264574381657 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795270587398 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980924540906 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183759963682 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12884386667 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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