The line graph provides information about the amount of wages per week earned by graduate employees of different age groups in 2002.
Overall, young employees' earnings were the lowest for all three degrees. However it grew up as ages of workers were older and remained almost stable after 45-60, except those with higher degree, thus their salary increased at the pre-retirement age.
Young people at ages 21 to 25 with first degree and other qualifications got the lowest salary at about £350 and just above £400 respectively. The older the employers were the higher were their wages. The graduates with other qualifications earned the highest amount of money at above £800 at the age between 36 and 40, while for those with first degree the pick was at under £700. However earnings of employees older than 40 years old saw a downward trend for these particular degrees. Whilst other-qualification-graduates' income fell gradually, the salary of employees with the first degree remained approximately stable between ages 40 and 60. Pre-retirement aged people with first degree and other qualifications earned around £700.
Similarly, employees with postgraduate degree earned the least amount of many (about £400) at ages between 21 and 25 and it increased substantially at ages 31 to 45. Then it experienced a fall at ages between 45 and 55. However, in contrast with other two types of degree, it saw an upward trend at ages of 56-60 and reached pick at about £800.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 74, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... were the lowest for all three degrees. However it grew up as ages of workers were olde...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...irst degree the pick was at under £700. However earnings of employees older than 40 yea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, similarly, then, thus, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08230452675 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08814766447 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8491733103 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.916666667 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34746421803 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141081805067 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871638163423 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217115667105 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04552642758 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.