The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The line chart compares the money in dollars spent on books in Australia, Germany, Italy and France in 10 year period.
It is obvious that money spent in all for countries increases uring the perio shown. Germany spent by far the highest amount of money than any other country.
In 1995 Germany spent 80 billion dollars for books. By contrast, the figure for Australia was the lowest at 30 million dollars that is around three times less than in Germany. France and Italy had nearly the same trend in 1995 around 50million dollars. In 1999 the figure for all countries increase, but in Italy it declines back at 50 million.
From 1999 to 2001 money spent for books in Australia stay steadily at 40 millions. Figure for Germany slightly declines an reaches 83 millions from 90 millions.
All Four countries reach their peak in 2005. Where Germany allocates 95 millions, France 75 millions, Italy 55 millions. Australia spends twice as it did in 1995.
- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 wor 56
- The graph shows the amount spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005. 61
- The two pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. 61
- the table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 87
- Some people prefer to work for a large company. Other prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...s. Figure for Germany slightly declines an reaches 83 millions from 90 millions. ...
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Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an reach' or simply 'reaches'?
Suggestion: an reach; reaches
...s. Figure for Germany slightly declines an reaches 83 millions from 90 millions. All Fo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85869565217 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27522096395 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559782608696 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0615809604 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.230769230769 5.23603664747 4% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347913323724 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139494345425 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.231520133534 0.0843802449381 274% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246237177856 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.306796327308 0.0819641961636 374% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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