The graph shows the average number of UK commuters traveling each day by car, bus and train between 1970 and 2030.
The line graph compares the figure for people commuting to work on a daily basis in the UK by three means of transport from 1970 to 2030.
In general, it is apparent that most commuters incline to use cars and trains to travel every day, and the two kinds of transport are expected to sharply increase in the future. While the other seems to experience a slight decrease in the mentioned period. In addition, cars are the most prominent means of the vehicle in the UK.
Looking at the figure for cars, in 1970, it stood at the highest point of about 5 million and then grew dramatically to 7 million over the next 30 years. After remaining stable from 2000 to 2010, it will rise drastically and is expected to reach a peak at 9 million in 2030.
In regard to the bus, it placed at the second position among three vehicles, making up 4 million in 1970 before witnessing a slight downward trend to nearly 3.2 million in 2010. In the next 20 years, there is forecast the level off, accounting for just only one-third of the number of private vehicles. In contrast, despite starting at the lowest point, railway transport saw a continual upward trend and then rising steeply to reach 5 million in 2030.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'traveling', 'travelling'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: traveling; travelling
...ommuters incline to use cars and trains to travel every day, and the two kinds of transpo...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cted to sharply increase in the future. While the other seems to experience a slight ...
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Line 7, column 304, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hird of the number of private vehicles. In contrast, despite starting at the lowes...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, second, then, third, while, in addition, in contrast, in general, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5504587156 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4292358405 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587155963303 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7908878672 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.222222222 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192894089644 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739948755655 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654185349178 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119145846202 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651033165474 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.