The graph shows the contribution of three sectors - agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the UK economy in twentieth century.
The bar chart indicates how UK economy is affected as percentage by sectors such as agriculture,manufacturing, business and financial services over the period from 1900 to 2000 in twentieth century.
It is seemed clearly that economic contribution of the business and financial services increased during the period whereas the manufacturing affection decreased on UK economy. Regarding as contribution of the agriculture, it fell from 1900 to 2000 except for the biggest contribution among all years in 1950.
As regards the first, agriculture accounted for almost 50% of economic contribution in 1900 before climbing to roughly %53 in 1950. Furthermore, it experienced approximately %40 and %56 decrease sharply from 1950 to 1975 and 2000 respectively.
In terms of business/financial services and manufacturing, it was evident that the manufacturing contribution declined gradually from %45 to %15 in contrast to steadily rising of the business and financial services from %4 to %35 steadily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , manufacturing
...ercentage by sectors such as agriculture,manufacturing, business and financial services over t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, regarding, whereas, as regards, except for, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71333333333 4.92477711251 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.78732388663 2.65546596893 143% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3909400166 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.833333333 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5 5.23603664747 334% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354955247843 0.215688989381 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166562209962 0.103423049105 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137177231104 0.0843802449381 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224540291313 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135256523193 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.2329268293 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 11.4140731707 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.4329268293 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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