The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph depicts the yearly income of three different bakery shop in London from the year 2000-2010.
Overall, the earning of two bakery shop namely bemie's buns and Robbe's bakery was in rising phase while lovely loaves bakery was in declining phase over those 10 years.
The bakery shop name robbe's bakery annual income was stable till 2005 and started to earn more dramatically until it reach the annual income approximately 100,000 euro, whereas in 2010, it reached the peak by earning more than 2 years age. Meanwhile, Bemie's buns annual income was in increasing mode with some fluctuation over a decade.till 2003, its income was increasing with some fluctuation, while the yeaely income started to stablize with 40000 euro per annum. after 2006, the annual earning of the bakery shop started to raise until it reaches the peak in the year 2010 (62,000 euro per annum approximately).
However lovely loaves bakery income was highest among these two bakery its earning was fluctuated till 2004 and started to decline drastically in the year 2005 with the loss of more than 40000 euro. after the year 2008 its income was start to stabilize with the incom of 40000euro per year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'loaves'' or 'loaf's'?
Suggestion: loaves'; loaf's
...bakery was in rising phase while lovely loaves bakery was in declining phase over thos...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
...y income started to stablize with 40000 euro per annum. after 2006, the annual earni...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
... to stablize with 40000 euro per annum. after 2006, the annual earning of the bakery...
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Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m. after 2006, the annual earning of the bakery shop started to raise until it r...
^^
Line 3, column 517, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., the annual earning of the bakery shop started to raise until it reaches the pe...
^^
Line 4, column 16, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'loaves'' or 'loaf's'?
Suggestion: loaves'; loaf's
...er annum approximately. However lovely loaves bakery income was highest among these t...
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Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ghest among these two bakery its earning was fluctuated till 2004 and started to ...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ically in the year 2005 with the loss of more than 40000 euro. after the year 200...
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Line 4, column 196, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'euro' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'euros'.
Suggestion: euros
... 2005 with the loss of more than 40000 euro. after the year 2008 its income was sta...
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Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...with the loss of more than 40000 euro. after the year 2008 its income was start to s...
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Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “after” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...with the loss of more than 40000 euro. after the year 2008 its income was start to s...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93034825871 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30725650683 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507462686567 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9450258859 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.571428571 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135677315107 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085465776245 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618025116614 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106785554442 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542398252187 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.