The graph shows that the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The line graph reveals the need for electric power in England during distinctive days in winter and summer, And the circular chart illustrates how power is used in a normal English house. Data is calibrated in percentage and number of units use per hour.
It can be clearly seen that , In winter Initial units of electricity is almost the double of the units used in summer. From 0 to 6 hours use of units of electricity first increase and than decrease in winter but in summer use of units is decreased slowly and reaches to 30,000 and 12000 respectively. Moreover from 6 hours , the demand of electricity is increased more than 40,000 units per hour and then steadily decreased to its initial value. Whereas units used in summer fluctuate arround its initial value .
Moving further to pie chart , Most of the light in England Is used for heating room and heating water. As well as 17.5%Electricity is used in ovens , kettles and in washing machines. Equal amount of light is used for other electronic tools such as radio, TV, lighting etcetera.
From overall analysis, it is clear that light is more Used in winter and almost half of the light is used to heat rooms or to heat water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...per hour. It can be clearly seen that , In winter Initial units of electricity ...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: AND_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...units of electricity first increase and than decrease in winter but in summer use of...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...aches to 30,000 and 12000 respectively. Moreover from 6 hours , the demand of electricit...
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Line 3, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...2000 respectively. Moreover from 6 hours , the demand of electricity is increased ...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...teadily decreased to its initial value. Whereas units used in summer fluctuate arround ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...mmer fluctuate arround its initial value . Moving further to pie chart , Most of ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ial value . Moving further to pie chart , Most of the light in England Is used fo...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ell as 17.5%Electricity is used in ovens , kettles and in washing machines. Equal ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, then, well, whereas, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67942583732 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55525025572 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531100478469 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8621547463 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293500289765 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123661701229 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906635026838 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182082692054 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927546651741 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.