The graph shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart show how electricity is used in an average English home.

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The graph shows the demand for electricity in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie chart show how electricity is used in an average English home.

The first linear representation the information about the demand of electricity units in tow different season, and second pie chart raveals the percentum of the electricity usage by electronic equipment in England.

It can be seen that, the daily demand of electricity unit in England. In this season of Summer under the 9 hour 11000 units use, and next and 12 to 24 hours electronic units slightly fluctuate. Moreover in the winter season maximum demand of electricity unit per day upto 40000.

As far as, trend is concerned that usage of electricity in homes. Firstly 52.5 percentage electricity use the products like hitting rooms and heating water. Moreover 17.5% electric uses has been oven and washing machine. Furthermore lighting TV and radio 15% electric use and lastly vacuum cleaner and food mixer and electronic tools also 15% use of electricity.

Overall, mostly people are using the electricity through the heating rooms and heating water that is 62.5% percentum.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...rs electronic units slightly fluctuate. Moreover in the winter season maximum demand of ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...c units slightly fluctuate. Moreover in the winter season maximum demand of electricity unit per ...
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Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...s like hitting rooms and heating water. Moreover 17.5% electric uses has been oven and w...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...uses has been oven and washing machine. Furthermore lighting TV and radio 15% electric use ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, moreover, second, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24683544304 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75862981485 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8524202681 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1111111111 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271733614114 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119818133255 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477172839572 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160336462134 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428200097059 0.0819641961636 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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