The graph shows the number of boys and girls playing sport in an English town in 2012.
This graph illustrates different number of childrens playing 6 different types of games(Tennis, Badminton, Cycling, Swimming, Football and Hockey) in an English town in 2012. Overall, swimming and tennis both are played by large number of male and females as compared to hockey which is played by least number of childrens.
First of all boys have shown a great interest in playing football as 60 boys want to play this game as compared to girls which is only 20 in number, while on the other hand both boys and girls don’t want to play hockey.
Girls have shown more interest in swimming and badminton than boys (Girls:Boys, 50:40 and 40:30 respectively), while on the other side, males are more interested than females in playing tennis and cycling which is almost half of each other.
So this shows that boys have more interest in games 4 out of 6 games than girls.
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Essay evaluation report by e-grader
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27485380117 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.157894736842 0.116061578633 136% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0818713450292 0.0759168565197 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0233918128655 0.0366838410393 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.169590643275 0.155750635184 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0584795321637 0.0379272487307 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49094672329 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233918128655 0.0210936926555 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0643274853801 0.0948980150116 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0175438596491 0.00967000014798 181% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 877.0 1161.00487805 76% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.9 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80794701987 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298013245033 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218543046358 0.247514529752 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158940397351 0.171178102325 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0860927152318 0.112407865282 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49094672329 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.546246751206 102% => OK
Word variations: 45.386015504 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 30.2 23.0094962315 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0942064745 42.9750493124 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.4 135.714022679 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 23.0094962315 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.689975730869 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 52.0543046358 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.77419354839 2.94281807926 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458925544706 0.418131533498 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.264346476526 0.181151798455 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0509948874483 0.0850326197045 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.894156245643 0.706616315825 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130060955122 0.157042692854 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.253287866361 0.228904883108 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907278848675 0.108899403657 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269659806895 0.367819155151 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0254936180692 0.0812612215331 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267989054048 0.316326947829 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478083153267 0.0921553760075 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'first of all', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.27485380117 0.268076937826 103% => OK
Verbs: 0.157894736842 0.116061578633 136% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0818713450292 0.0759168565197 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0233918128655 0.0366838410393 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.169590643275 0.155750635184 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0584795321637 0.0379272487307 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.49094672329 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0233918128655 0.0210936926555 111% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0643274853801 0.0948980150116 68% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0175438596491 0.00967000014798 181% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 877.0 1161.00487805 76% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.9 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.80794701987 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298013245033 0.337110787985 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.218543046358 0.247514529752 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.158940397351 0.171178102325 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0860927152318 0.112407865282 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49094672329 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.546246751206 102% => OK
Word variations: 45.386015504 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 5.0 8.93414634146 56% => OK
Sentence length: 30.2 23.0094962315 131% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0942064745 42.9750493124 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 175.4 135.714022679 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 23.0094962315 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 0.689975730869 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 52.0543046358 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.77419354839 2.94281807926 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.458925544706 0.418131533498 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.264346476526 0.181151798455 146% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0509948874483 0.0850326197045 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.894156245643 0.706616315825 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.130060955122 0.157042692854 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.253287866361 0.228904883108 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907278848675 0.108899403657 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.269659806895 0.367819155151 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0254936180692 0.0812612215331 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267989054048 0.316326947829 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478083153267 0.0921553760075 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.08536585366 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.02926829268 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 7.1512195122 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.