The bar graph provided shows the number of boys and girls playing certain sports in an English town in 2012.
The sport most popular with both sexes is swimming, while the sport least popular is hockey. In addition, football has the largest gap between the sexes, while hockey has the smallest gap.
Among all sports shown, football has the most amount of boys playing with 60 boys, and hockey has the least with just 15 boys. For girls, swimming is the most popular sport, with 50 girls going, whereas hockey is the least popular, with just less than 10 girls playing.
More boys than girls play tennis, football, hockey and cycle, while more girls than boys play badminton and swim.
The sport distribution among both sexes is uneven: for boys, hockey has much less boys playing than the other five sports; for girls, tennis, badminton, and swimming have much more participants than cycling, football, and hockey.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun boys is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...es is uneven: for boys, hockey has much less boys playing than the other five sports...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96153846154 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04799415988 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.49358974359 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7516180459 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.571428571 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339124289679 0.215688989381 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198722491259 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.254737331724 0.0843802449381 302% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257484076679 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.279551879145 0.0819641961636 341% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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