The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995.

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The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995.

The graph gives information about the number of people suffering from X disease in someland over a period of 35 years from 1960 to 1995.

Overall, it is clear that an outbreak of X disease in someland was done until the mid seventies, remained stable for 5 years, before dropping to zero in 1990.

At the beginning of the given period, only 100 people suffered from X disease in this area. this condition remaind stable for 5 years, before rising to 500 cases , which was stable for next 5 years, in the 1970.

In 1970, a furtunate event was done in this region, with the number of cases of infected people dropping to zero during a decade. For last 5 years of given period, any cases was not recorded in someland.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 607.0 965.302439024 63% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63358778626 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33471033749 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564885496183 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 173.7 283.868780488 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2823069938 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.166666667 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230723733156 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115364536172 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090564247089 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148648456986 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971183748123 0.0819641961636 118% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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