The presented graph illustrated the number of workers died from an important injury in New Zealand between 1992 to 2010. The overall trend is downward bar some short periods where the numbers may rise again. Certainly, by the end of the period the number is significantly lower than the start. And it has reached its highest number of 6,632 in 1994.
The number of severe injuries began approximately at about 6,217. There was an immediate though minor increase in the next two years until it hits a peak in 1994.it has followed a decreasing pattern with the exception of the year 1997, then it has dipped modestly until 2002 where the number of death is 5,534. it's a period of gradual increase in the next 4 years, with a dramatic decline which is predicted to continue until 2010.
Overall numbers of fatalities fluctuated, though there is a modest decrease at the end of the period in comparison with the beginning of the survey.
- the graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995. 61
- the graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995. 61
- Some young people look forward to a year of travelling ,a gap year,before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons.For others this is an expensive waste of time .Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
- Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days.Why is this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences. 78
- how should we ensure that television is a positive influence in the life of children? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 199, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...94.it has followed a decreasing pattern with the exception of the year 1997, then it has dipped modes...
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Line 2, column 311, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Its
...002 where the number of death is 5,534. its a period of gradual increase in the nex...
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Line 2, column 311, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...002 where the number of death is 5,534. its a period of gradual increase in the nex...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 774.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74846625767 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54703948529 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59509202454 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5904972146 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20828577458 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919335305553 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904976096803 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137370611543 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706358064715 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.