The graph shows the number of marriages and divorces in the UK between 1975 and 2000.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the figure for weddings and the breakdown of marriage life in the UK over a period of 25 years
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the amount of divorces had slightly grown up all over the period. Nevertheless, the remaining features had the same trend, from the beginning it started to rise until it suddenly declined.
At the beginning, this number of divorces was just below 100.000 before rising to around 250.000 in 2000. Meanwhile, the figure for second weddings accounted for about 150.000 in 1975 and increased to a little more than 200.000 in 1985 before it broke the previous at around 250.000 in 2000.
In 1975, total marriages experienced the highest number of all four which was just below 500.000. This figure steadily surged to reach a peak of about 650.000 in 1985 and fell down to a little less than 600.000 in 2000. Furthermore, the figure for first marriages almost had the same trend with the total weddings which fluctuated between 300.000 to just over 400.000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...life in the UK over a period of 25 years Looking from an overall perspective, it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, nevertheless, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94915254237 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52609983493 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576271186441 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9442401199 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.142857143 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171030311911 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806546254695 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482678896752 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984577890352 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460345820287 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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