The graph demonstrates the ability to manufacture oil of 6 different Gulf countries over the period of 20 years . In general, there was an upward trend among countries from 2000 to 2010, whereas this figure slightly fluctuated in 1999.
In 2010, the amount of oil generated appeared to grow up remarkably through years in millions of V Barrels per day . Specifically , in Iran, Iraq ,Kuwait and UAE , this number increased about a half million of oil production per day . In contrast , Qatar was the only nations seeming to have almost no changes just approximately 1 million , Meanwhile , Saudi Arabia reached its highest point with around 15 millions .
It can be obviously seen that between 2000 and 2010 , the manufacturing oil went up gradually from 2 to 4 millions .Nevertheless, there was a mere situation in Qatar where two figures underwent a light fluctuation . In 2000 , this country rose about 1 million but afterwards this reduced down to less than 1 million . The amount of oil produced in 1990 merged a considerable variation with the millions varying between 1 and hover 9 per day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, nevertheless, whereas, while, in contrast, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93442622951 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91681045242 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655737704918 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8351688248 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.875 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.23603664747 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11796170317 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589407481521 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361123539498 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883415150371 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297024361165 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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