A glance at the chart provided reveals some striking facts about teaching staff gender division in each listed department of a university during the year 2012.
Overall, mostly departments are dominated by male staff, while some departments experienced a majority of female staff.
As is illustrated the graph, there is a vast majority of male staff in Engineering department that account for around just under 90%, while merely 15% female staff was employeed in the department. However, in Education department, female staff is in majority, nearly 75%, men were only around 25%. Further, female staff was in majority in arts too, about 65% compared with male staff account for about 45%. in medicine department, both genders stayed almost equal, while science, law and business departments were also dominated by males, about 65%, 60% and again about 65% respectively.
- The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. 61
- Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the faculties of a major university in 2012. 73
- The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 89
- You have a problem with a neighbour.Write a letter to your neighbor. i your letter. Describe the problem. say how long it has been a problem.. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70587899552 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644927536232 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6999848622 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236275607853 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131075450253 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758961662964 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164969588574 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441645685404 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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