The preceding table charts clearly display and compare that is the proportion of computer possession from the year 2002 to 2010 both by comparison of total population and education level.
An initial impression from the graphs is that computer ownership jumped over the time scale and the figure for citizens’ education also shows a similar trend.
From the year 2002 onwards, the residents were inclined to possess computer devices, with a significant proportion at almost 60% . Also, the share of the population owning computers is constantly increasing over the period of time, with nearly three quarter people owning computers.
As can be seen from the second graph is that the percentages of computer ownership by education level illustrated the correlated uptrend to the first graph. The most significant rise is seen in people without a high school diploma from mere 15 percent in 2002 to almost 40 percent in 2010. Meanwhile, the percentages of people owning computers with a high school graduate degree, incomplete college, bachelor's degree and postgraduate degree also jumped from 40, 55, 70 and 80 to 65, 85, 90 and 95 respectively. According to the table, with the figure experiencing an inerratic period was proportional to the intellectual level during the time scale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... three quarter people owning computers. As can be seen from the second graph is th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2572815534 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87103688738 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577669902913 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.699956446 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.375 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284995778762 0.215688989381 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125881236235 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862005676867 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184274043666 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0670948461497 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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