The graphs below show the age structure of a European country from 1901 to 1981 and a prediction for 2021.
The given pie charts illustrate the change in the population by age group in Europe over the course of 80 years from 1901 to 1981 and forecast for 2021.
Overall, 0-65 year accounted for the largest percentage than any other groups while the lowest proportion of age was over 85 increased slightly and predicted to go up in 2021. Moreover, the total population in Europe had dramatically upward.
In 1901, the rate of age was 0-65 year accounted for nearly all the total population, at 95 % while the age group of 65 and the over 65 years only account for a small percentage, 1%, and 4% respectively.
Between 1901 and 1941, there is a significant increase in population, with 38 million people and 52 million people, respectively. The highest rate of age was the 0-65 year remained completely, at 95 percent. In 1981, Europeans had the age of 65 dropped to 83%, those with the age ranging from 65-85 at 13% and those whose age is more than 85 is at 4%.
According to 2021, the population is excepted to go up to 87 million people who nearly doubles the population in 1901. The data for the group under aged 65 is going to decline of 4 percent and the figure for people from 65 to 85 years old and people over 85 continue to increase of 2 percent similarly.
- The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.Write at least 150 words. 78
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- The bar chart below shows the percentage of government spending on roads and transport in 4 countries in the years 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 89
- The table below shows the employment of students from four countries in the UK after their first courses in 2001 85
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compa 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, similarly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49130434783 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61080955464 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491304347826 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.931765273 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.777777778 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5555555556 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228164739161 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102202031402 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068932789565 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150944481227 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457482843632 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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