The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the enrollment of foreign students & local student in Australian universities from 2001 to 2010. The red line idicates total enrollment & commencing. Blue mark indicates commencing. Where y-axis indicate years & x-axis indicate number of students.
Overall, the total of foreign student is increasing year by year, while total of local student is incresed first few years but now it's static.And commencing of foreign student is more than local students.
Firstly,In case of total & commencing overseas student were less than local students in 2001. In 2001 total of overseas students were 2000 but in local students were 4000.In case if foreign students every year it is increasing. In 2010 students students were 8000 while local is static from year 2006 to 2010 & students were 6000 , which is less than foreign students.
In case of commencing, In 2001 both foreign & local students are same. But year by year commencing of foreign student is increasing. In 2010 foreign students were about 4000 in number. While in 2002 local student rapidly increased than foreign students, but from 2003 local students rapidly decreased & it increased in 2008 . And there number of students is in between 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...esed first few years but now its static.And commencing of foreign student is more t...
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... is more than local students. Firstly,In case of total & commencing overseas stu...
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...e of total & commencing overseas student were less than local students in 2001. ...
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...re 2000 but in local students were 4000.In case if foreign students every year it ...
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...n students every year it is increasing. In 2010 students students were 8000 while ...
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...ts every year it is increasing. In 2010 students students were 8000 while local is static from ye...
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...m year 2006 to 2010 & students were 6000 , which is less than foreign students. ...
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...which is less than foreign students. In case of commencing, In 2001 both foreig...
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...rapidly decreased & it increased in 2008 . And there number of students is in bet...
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...n 2008 . And there number of students is in between 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32989690722 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67515352968 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453608247423 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.7229821961 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5384615385 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290302995047 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138704370749 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787641786818 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214754293341 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0112235520945 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.