The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown

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The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the republic of Freedonia.

Write a report for a university teacher describing the information shown.

The graph compares and contrasts data on the changes in the number of men and women labours in six different work fields in terms of 21 years located in the Republic of Freedonia.

Generally speaking, the number of employees was unequally distributed between male and female, specifically with male workers dominating in four sectors.

Men in manufacturing sector averaged a considerably 350.000 higher people. The number remained constant in more than two decades. The same condition happened in Public Sector (non-defence) that steadily maintained more 200.000 male workers than women at the sa...

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