The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.
The table provides information regarding the number of male and female workers in six different work fields in Freedonia in 1975 and 1975. Overall, affairs were divided unequally between males and females that men outnumbered women in the number of employees.
Men and women in manufacturing sector stood at around 600000 and 250000 in 1975 and remained constantly after two decades. Similarly, the number of workers public sector(non-defence) stood at nearly 810000 and 610000 males and females respectively.
Furthermore, in some sectors female workers dominated males throughout twenty years such as communication (increasing two times from 225000 to 550000) and wholesale and retail trade reached from 450000 to 800000 which was 100000 higher than men in 1995. Moreover, in finance and banking sector men did not changed their position with 400000, while women witnessed rose three times to approximately 450000. Finally, the gap between the number of workers got smaller when female workers doubled to 100000(100000 numbers lower than males) in a final year.
- The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland 81
- The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Solving environmental problems should be the responsibilities of one international organization instead of state or national governments
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 67
- The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
... finance and banking sector men did not changed their position with 400000, while women...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, similarly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4756097561 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80503711108 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65243902439 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.753207303 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.285714286 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 5.23603664747 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320404037211 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149670438751 0.103423049105 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822829899872 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220397890028 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530373668956 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.8 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.