The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar charts illustrate three types of music albums: pop, rock, and classical, which were bought by British people based on gender and age category.

As the charts outline, male candidates had outnumbered in purchasing all given types of genres. Among those, the older generation passionated significantly towards classical music compared to the rest two varieties.

British nationals spent an equal amount of purchasing of both types of music: pop and rock. Over 30% of aged 25 to 34 years of people purchased pop-music, which was slightly higher than younger, around five percent higher than that of aged 35 to 44, one-fourth of older adults. Overall, approximately 30% of males spent on pop music, whereas around 20% of the females. Similarly, in terms of rock music, the British younger generation contributed 30% revenue to buy rock music, which was closely increased on 25 to 34 years of aged people. However, this figure gradually dropped on 35 to 44 aged citizens (25%), a dramatic decline in old nationals (10%). Same as pop music, rock music lovers were more from males 30% and fewer females 16%.

However, concerning classical music, a significant proportion of elder generation (20%) purchased classical music, but this trend extremely weak in 35 to 44 aged members and youngsters, with a figure less than 5% and interestingly a noticeable growth can be seen in aged 25 to 34 aged people and 16% youth purchased traditional music. Like the other two, more males interested to purchase classical genre, 9%, and it was around 2% higher than its counterparts.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 259.0 196.424390244 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07722007722 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77589798734 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 106.607317073 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57528957529 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.4277987105 43.030603864 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.545454545 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161902897195 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696354857529 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379360589722 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107117333323 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023694369009 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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