The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
The bar graph illustrates 3 categories of music albums bought by the British according to gender and age group. Overall, males have a tendency to purchase more albums than females. Additionally, Pop music and rock music are prevalent among youngsters in Britain, meanwhile, the middle-aged population preferred classical music more.
For pop music, almost 30% of males bought albums whereas the figure for females stood at approximated 20%. At the same time, the age 25-34 group contributed the major of pop music album’s sale at over 35% opposed to nearly only 5% of over 45 aged people for the same category.
The market of rock music albums was mainly dominated by men with a purchase record of over 30% compared to 16% purchases done by women. Meanwhile, the percentage of people from 16-24 age group bought rock music album was the highest (32%) compared to only 6% of over 45 aged population seems interested in it
There was a small gap between the figure for males and females. The majority percentage was 45+ age (20%). Followed by 25-34 age, 5% less than 45+. The other age group only bought less than 5%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81770833333 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53130894136 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546875 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 61.3026100586 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293267970764 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125240773981 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635561760145 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186385876847 0.15604864568 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906377025353 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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