The graphs below show the weekly earnings of men and women in euros for the 16-59 age groups as per their eduction level.

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The graphs below show the weekly earnings of men and women in euros for the 16-59 age groups as per their eduction level.

The given layout demonstrate the information about the camparison of weekly income in average for both gender. Who have academic degree and non- academic degree. The data is calibrated in pounds.
It is clearly seen that, Males payment in a week is sharply increased from age 16 to 59 for both academic and non- academic learner, reaching high of income is evident at the age 50-59 by graduations. In the tow last level more or less changes have been shown for non-graduation.
Moving ahead, for fomale, income remain mostly the some from ages 25 to 59 only for graduated learner. while, from ages 25 to 59 the income of non-graduated learner are zigzag Trent to 250 pounds.
Overall. Income age range for both gender shows that , the highest average income in a week is dominated by moles in both graduation and non- graduation category.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 232, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun changes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...duations. In the tow last level more or less changes have been shown for non-graduat...
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Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...d, for fomale, income remain mostly the some from ages 25 to 59 only for graduated l...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “while” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es 25 to 59 only for graduated learner. while, from ages 25 to 59 the income of non-g...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
...s 25 to 59 only for graduated learner. while, from ages 25 to 59 the income of non-g...
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Line 4, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ome age range for both gender shows that , the highest average income in a week i...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... shows that , the highest average income in a week is dominated by moles in both ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, while, more or less

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84027777778 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65229579955 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6112635685 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18605941701 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808024888968 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570458857295 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118380567881 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483425774339 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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