The graphs below show the weekly earnings of men and women in Euros for the 16-59 age groups as per their education level.
The presented horizontal layouts depict the information about the weekly salary of males and females for the six different age classess , and further seggregated according to their level of education. Collaboration of data is done in Euros, which is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that both categories of men experienced an upward trend throughout the given age groups.The below graduates women have some fluctuations, but the income of graduates women are inclining in all age groups.
It can be clearly seen that, the earnings of graduates men are starting from above 200 in 20- 24, then the income dramatically upsurge in all groups. Moreover, the two age classes: 40-49 and 50-59 have been accounted between 600 to 700 euros and reach the top level.However, the range of men among 40- 59 have same income at 500.
On the contary, we can observed the record of
graduates of women salaries exhibit the slight ups and downs in all age groups. The females are earned only 100, which are categorised under the 16-19. The young graduates are earned the 250, then the remaining all groups have stable income at 300 in the given chart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09743589744 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72960614148 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8421582788 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251714505465 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903463079458 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498286269399 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110584004739 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557282447527 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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