Health care should not be provided for free regardless of a person’s income. The health of a person is in their own hands and they should, therefore, be held accountable for that. Do you agree with this opinion?
There is no doubt that health care is always a very hot problem. It is said that people need to pay for health care irrespective of a person's income. I totally disagree with this opinion. Although everyone should keep themselves healthy, the government have responsibility for paying for as well giving their citizens the best medical service.
In the first place, obviously, the pace of life is faster and faster. People are busier and busier, they have more work to solve as well as have less time to spend on themselves and their families. In other words, they have no time to take care of their health.Moreover, the fee is quite high, which make contribution to the fact that people don't want to go for a health check. If health care is free and the government stimulate people to have annual check-ups, they will find that how beneficial they can get from regular health care. As a result, they will arrange time to go to hospitals or clinics to protect their health.
In addition, the proportion of the poor is the main reason why health care should be on the house. Although this rate has decreased dramatically, the figure is still a hot concern. Especially, in most developing countries, the percentage accounts for more than 50 % of their population. Thus, if health care must be paid for, the poor will not have enough money to afford. Consequently, epidemics will spread rapidly, the number of deaths will increase and the national economy is going worse and worse. Only by providing free health care with inhabitants, can both residents and financial system develop better and better.
To sum up, to make sure that all citizens will have better and health and stronger immunity, the government ought to have responsibility for providing free medical service with people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Line 5, column 262, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
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Line 5, column 343, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ke contribution to the fact that people dont want to go for a health check. If healt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, in addition, no doubt, as a result, as well as, in other words, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 965.302439024 155% => OK
No of words: 304.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93421052632 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68030330364 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559210526316 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 283.868780488 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 8.94146341463 179% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2094023707 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.75 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352682588658 0.215688989381 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11667839854 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703244057135 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216658153916 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677211914276 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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