the hobbies of British people from 2003 to 2015

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the hobbies of British people from 2003 to 2015

The graphs indicate the recreation habituation of British people in the 10-year period from 2003 to 2013.

Overall. Books and Film/Music gradually gained more attention meanwhile Clothes and Travel experienced a reverse trend.

In the year of 2003, Film/Music accounted for 21%, taking the third rank, which was followed by a remarkable increase by 12% over 5 years, becoming the leading position at 33%. In similarity, Books climbed by 3% from 19% in 2003 to 22% in 2013 (third place in this year).

There was a significant drop in the favorite level of Travel when the figure of this declined noticeably from 36% in 2003 to 29% in 2013, falling out of the king's throne. The same pattern was witnessed in its counterpart of Clothes with a drop of 8% to the lowest number of 16% at the end of the survey period.

In conclusion, people gradually showed more preference in home recreation than wandering outside.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70189836348 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628205128205 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2755989211 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201265561283 0.215688989381 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958301357678 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102236197782 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113405785344 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108566900894 0.0819641961636 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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