The given table charts provide details about the sales of coffee and bananas which was purchased by five different countries from 1999 to 2004.
Overall, it is interesting to note that the sale of coffee was the highest in united kingdom whereas the sale of bananas was most preffered by citizens of switzerland.
It is Apparent from the chart that the sale of coffee was 1.5 million euros in UK which was one fifth in 2004, whereas Switzerland preferred 3 millions euros sale of coffee in 1999, it doubled in 2004. The sale of coffee was 1.8 million euros in Denmark,while sale was similar in Belgium. Moreover. around 1 million euros of sale was preferred by citizens of Sweden.
Moving further, the sale of Bananas was more preferred by Switzerland which was 47 million euros in 2004, which followed by 1 million in UK. In addition, the masses of Belgium purchased bananas 0 6 million euros in 1999 which increased in 2004, whilst the minimum sale of Bananas was preferred by Sweden in 1999. The sale of banana was 2 million euros in Denmark which decreased in 2004.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
... coffee was 1.8 million euros in Denmark,while sale was similar in Belgium. Moreover. ...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...mark,while sale was similar in Belgium. Moreover. around 1 million euros of sale was pre...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Around
... sale was similar in Belgium. Moreover. around 1 million euros of sale was preferred b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73936170213 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53612982797 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 82.0 106.607317073 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436170212766 0.547539520022 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6246648782 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.375 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23845164663 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155122355379 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901399811683 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200823808759 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952647479933 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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