IELTS WRITING TASK 1 BAR CHART and TABLE
The given double-bar chart illustrates a country’s exports in five different categories (namely petroleum products, engineered goods, gems and jewelry, agricultural products, and textiles) for the years 2015 and 2016. The accompanying table provides information about the percentage increase or decrease for each category in exports for the year 2016 as compared to its previous year.
Overall, the year 2016 benefitted from a higher number of exports as compared to 2015. The highest number of exports are observed in petroleum products for both the years whereas agricultural products and textiles contribute the least for the same.
All the categories except gems and jewelry saw a rise in the percentage of exports from 2015 to 2016, among which the textile industry increased the most by 15.24% (from nearly $26 billion to just above $30 billion). The percentage increase was the least in the agricultural products category (only 0.81%).
The exports in petroleum products increased marginally by 3% from 2015 to 2016 (nearly $60 billion), and a rise of nearly $5 billion exports was seen in engineered goods (that is, 8.5% increase). Gems and jewelry stands out as an anomaly, as its exports decreased by 5.18% from nearly $43 billion 2015 to just above $40 million in 2016.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
...rease was the least in the agricultural products category only 0.81%. The exports in ...
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Line 7, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...6 nearly 0 billion, and a rise of nearly billion exports was seen in engineered g...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...nearly 0 billion, and a rise of nearly billion exports was seen in engineered goods th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19024390244 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78974070168 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49756097561 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1480381352 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0344732140226 0.215688989381 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0169875054074 0.103423049105 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314960053147 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0227724182308 0.15604864568 15% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394429853869 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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