The illustration outlines the data of several genres of film released in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012. In general, drama and documentary had the highest number of releases, while the largest income from the ticker sales was from comedy.
First of all, there were two identical amounts of releasing data, drama and documentary, 35 releases accounting for 23.6 percent each. However, drama contributes 8.3 percent of income from ticket sales, whilst the second occupied for under 3 percent. Although the statistics of comedy releases were lower than two mentioned genres, the ticket sales’ income of it was six times higher than drama’s.
Moving to the biopic, there was only one released film, but it experienced approximately 9 percent of income from ticket sales, while romance’s was 0.8 percent. Horror’s and thriller’s releasing amount were similar, 9.5 percent and 8.5 percent respectively, while the proportion of horror’s income was 19 percent larger than thriller’s. Otherwise, the number of action releases was 2.7 percent, crime releases (4.7 percent) and other (5.4 percent).
Length Task Response Coherence and Cohesion Lexical Resource Grammatical Range and Accuracy TOTAL SCORE
The illustration outlines the data of several genres of film released in the UK and Republic of Ireland in 2012. In general, drama and documentary had the highest number of releases, while the largest income from the ticker sales was from comedy.
First of all, there were two identical amounts of releasing data, drama and documentary, 35 releases accounting for 23.6 percent each. However, drama contributes 8.3 percent of income from ticket sales, whilst the second occupied for under 3 percent. Although the statistics of comedy releases were lower than two mentioned genres, the ticket sales’ income of it was six times higher than drama’s.
Moving to the biopic, there was only one released film, but it experienced approximately 9 percent of income from ticket sales, while romance’s was 0.8 percent. Horror’s and thriller’s releasing amount were similar, 9.5 percent and 8.5 percent respectively, while the proportion of horror’s income was 19 percent larger than thriller’s. Otherwise, the number of action releases was 2.7 percent, crime releases (4.7 percent) and other (5.4 percent).
Length Task Response Coherence and Cohesion Lexical Resource Grammatical Range and Accuracy TOTAL SCORE
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: APOSTROPHE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'romances'.
Suggestion: romances
...cent of income from ticket sales, while romance’s was 0.8 percent. Horror’s and thriller’...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, second, so, while, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1034.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52941176471 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7715603029 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609625668449 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.7586135659 43.030603864 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 114.888888889 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461923068343 0.215688989381 214% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.210722421426 0.103423049105 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.168442161964 0.0843802449381 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.314974334467 0.15604864568 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.315422661465 0.0819641961636 385% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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