The following line graph and table illustrate the data of temperature and number of hours of the sunshine by average values of them in London, New York and Sydney.
Overall, the average temperature of New york experienced highest throught the year with a fluctuation, however, Sydney and London stated with little amounts and remained low at the end. In comparison, New york had largest hours sunshine, followed by Sydney, while London comprised least.
At the beginning of the year, the temperatures of Sydney and London accounted for 4 units and below 10 units respectively. The two areas temperatures grew slightly by March. In April Sydney’s temperature was around 12 units and crossed over the London’s temperature. Accrossing the month May, the two areas temperatures were higher than New york and enreased gradually upto 27 units in Sydney and 23 units in London. Then dramatic fall happened to these two areas where Sydney stood at 5 units and London was 4 units higher than this. There annual hours also reflected the temperature of then where in Sydney the hours were 2473 and London felt 1180 hours of sunheat.
In the meantime, New york felt around felt around 25 units of temperature at the beginning and ended in December with 25 units also by a fluctuation through the July with around 15 units. The sunshine hours of New york also conformed it’s temperature and peaked the highest sunheat by 2535 hours per annum.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the largest'.
Suggestion: had the largest
...low at the end. In comparison, New york had largest hours sunshine, followed by Sydney, whi...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hours'' or 'hour's'?
Suggestion: hours'; hour's
...nd. In comparison, New york had largest hours sunshine, followed by Sydney, while Lon...
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Line 7, column 27, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'felt around'.
Suggestion: felt around
...f sunheat. In the meantime, New york felt around felt around 25 units of temperature at the beginnin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04149377593 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74650559573 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49377593361 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1800865408 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.454545455 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9090909091 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414854810257 0.215688989381 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.190932787119 0.103423049105 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104667051665 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298775639396 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779582624417 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.