Incidence of X disease in Someland

This chart describes the changing of case X number in Ireland between 1983 -1992. The number fluctuated up and down from 1984 to 1988 then rose sharply up in 1990 before declined and removed completely in 1992.

In 1983, the number stood at 100 case then increased slowly to 200 cases in 1987. However, It reverse suddenly this trend in 1988 and went down 100 cases. After that, the number climbed sharply to 400 case before reduced and remained stable at 350 cases in 2 years. Finally, X disease had been disappear completely in 1992 after a steady decrease between 1989-1990.

To conclude, the graph show the developing of X disease in Ireland until 1991 and evanescence of this in 1990.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
This chart describes the changing of cas...
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...ned and removed completely in 1992. In 1983, the number stood at 100 case th...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reverses'?
Suggestion: reverses
...lowly to 200 cases in 1987. However, It reverse suddenly this trend in 1988 and went d...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... reverse suddenly this trend in 1988 and went down 100 cases. After that, the num...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disappeared'.
Suggestion: disappeared
...in 2 years. Finally, X disease had been disappear completely in 1992 after a steady decre...
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... steady decrease between 1989-1990. To conclude, the graph show the developi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 575.0 965.302439024 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7520661157 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41220401893 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619834710744 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 157.5 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.4766813877 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1428571429 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.049937085883 0.215688989381 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0270114898768 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427655454859 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0456708258265 0.15604864568 29% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406069725083 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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