As internet grows faster, many people utilize it for various activities. Describe the advantages of internet for human.
The result of the advanced technology creates some new rules to face the problem. It can be seen that the internet as the product of technology can make some activities to be ease. Thus, this essay would mention the merits of internet for people with several reasons.
To begin with, to send some files, most people choose electronic mail to deliver it.The reason is that sending data with email is believed more safety and fast compares to manual post. Therefore, it can make ease and efficient for human activity. More than that, internet can help people to share some important information to the others. For instance, the resident of Indonesia use some media social to spread information about the losing people or help poor sender. The goal of it is to help them and improve our humanity as human being. However, it is no doubt that internet has some benefits.
In addition,internet that has collaborated with GPS can show us the location superb. Particularly when we lost in unknown area. More than that, this technology can be used as a gizmo to increase the economic field. An example of this case, some unicorn companies such as gojek, uber, and grab rely the technology as a prime tool to deliver their passengers well and can choose the fastest track too.
To sum up, the using of internet in modern era can bring us the positive sides giving some profits in every part of life. Thus as human, we are to use it wisely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: The
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ing some profits in every part of life. Thus as human, we are to use it wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 5.60731707317 392% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71825396825 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4835405515 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 283.868780488 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6596869291 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2666666667 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183013870325 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702981253119 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593118794084 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113753887819 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614282072646 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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