Leadership and Influence
The perfect blossom is a rare thing. You could spend your life looking for one and it would not be a wasted life. I believe leadership can be nurtured. It is when we can overcome the situation and want it to be better. My city is in coastland maritime area in East Java called “Surabaya”. It has a conservative culture and tough competition in education. Long run-trial must be conducted for excellent marks and I’m getting used to it. That makes me learn about good qualities, especially in self-leadership, grits, and resilience.
When I’m in university. I was becoming a class instructor & coordinator because of my experience in coding and managing classes. Algorithm and Data Structure, Game Design and Computational Intelligence is the subject that I specialised to taught. The objectives of the classes were to help my fellow students learns from elemental until they can give their best. Being creative and making a meaningful impact on their project was also my responsibility.
My campus always oversaw several national level tech competitions from Microsoft, even they still have limited resources. To enhance the outcome, I’m also in charge of being Professor Assistant in Programming Laboratory as its facility for 2 years. The result of this intensives, in 2014 my campus has a top tier level in the national hall of fame. It also includes me as 2nd champion in Mobile Apps Application. In the end game, they have such great teamwork, it makes me think that helping people is a kind habit that I want to build in the process.
After my study in France. I helped the founder of mental-health start-up called RILIV.CO, Audrey Maximillian. I’m in charge of Head of Data or Data specialist. Growth and social impact were my primary job, but I also make Artificial Intelligence, a chatbot, to help the therapist probe clinical patient. This is when I get the first feeling that health services initiative may affect so many people getting better and faster treatment.
Right now, RILIV.CO actively gives easy access to psychologist across Indonesia with approximately 50,000+ users and awarded as Top 4 Google Business Group Story Search 2017.
Astra & EMTEK was also part of my journey in a corporate career. I joined as a Data and Analytics consultant and be on par with people who were more knowledgeable and more skilled. I used that opportunity to rise my aspiration and improving my service attitude to life whenever I go.
Summarizing, as Chevening Scholar and a leader, I will continue to open more opportunity not only for me to build the future bridge between Indonesia and UK, but also means give more Indonesian a better livelihood because I have a vision for them having a better quality of life by using technology.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-07-20 | ABCDEFGHI | 67 | view |
| 2019-11-06 | Firman Insan | 11 | view |
| 2019-09-02 | Ovaye | 11 | view |
| 2019-04-25 | Tam Thanh Nguyen | 48 | view |
| 2019-01-18 | thuybeo25092002 | 56 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 269, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...its facility for 2 years. The result of this intensives, in 2014 my campus has a top...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... that I want to build in the process. After my study in France. I helped the founde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, still, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 21.0 6.8 309% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 5.60731707317 963% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2319.0 965.302439024 240% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 460.0 196.424390244 234% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04130434783 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 3.73543355544 124% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04896003678 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 274.0 106.607317073 257% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595652173913 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 283.868780488 261% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 1.53170731707 1045% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 8.94146341463 313% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1285863135 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8214285714 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4285714286 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 3.83414634146 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 3.70975609756 458% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0297296497283 0.215688989381 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0114847616849 0.103423049105 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423673221207 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0122192450738 0.15604864568 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299309154729 0.0819641961636 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 132.0 40.7170731707 324% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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