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The graph depicts the quantity of three nutrition were consumed between 1981 and 2007.
Overall, the amount of 3 spreads fluctuated which butter’s and margarine’s amount decreased, meanwhile people consumed low fat and reduced bread had just been recorded since 19996 increased.
Despite a slight growth in 1986, the consumption of butter declined dramatically from about 160 grams in 1986 to 65 grams in 1996, made the element fall behind margarine’s amount. After a small drop in 1986, there was a substantial rise in people using margarine with exactly 100 grams in 1991 and stayed stably until 1996.
The amount of low fat and reduced spreads was recorded since 1996 with approximately 10 grams with the sharp increase of about 60 grams for 11 years, significantly surpassing butter’s and margarine’s amount to be the most popular spreads. From 1996 to 2007, people using butter continued its reduction of about 20 grams, whereas, the quantity of margarine observed a considerable fall of precisely 60 grams remained the lowest spread consumption.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44970414201 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1063003593 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.5590276609 43.030603864 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.5 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1666666667 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0236381835971 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0222975154911 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498587603673 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334462732366 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579306445696 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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